Early Drafts: Glenn's texts
The effects of the Aperture phenomenon were more pronounced in Glenn's behavior in previous versions
In the current version of Apertures, Glenn seems almost rational and his concern is freeing Jane from Aster. In a previous version, he was single-mindedly trying to get Jane all to himself by any means necessary. I also used a lot more “text-speak” that I did away with later because it felt juvenile and because phones have gotten way better at automatically correcting common typos. Also yes, we used to have monthly text message limits (it sucked).
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